22A Elevator Pitch #3

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d_duLfVg3vw&feature=youtu.be

I didn’t receive a whole lot of critical feedback on my second elevator post, so this time around, I rewrote my script to incorporate my new innovations within my idea. This includes emphasizing the culture of the company, the style, and methodology, etc. My statistic and opening hook remained the same, because of im really comfortable with those and wanted to start strong. I feel like this pitch is actually the better of my three.